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如何学写英语作文？（二）

下面我特地再列出两篇我用 TDC 方式写作的作文供读者参考，加深读者对这种写作方式的印象：

第一篇示范作文

A Misunderstanding I Will Never Forget（我永远忘不了的一次误会）

下笔方式：

本篇为记叙文，采用 TDC 的写作方式。



主题句：被朋友误会是个痛苦的经历，而我就有过这样的经历。

发展句：why（为什么有此经验）及 how（交代经过）

1. 与朋友约好去钓鱼，我却忘了这件事。

2. 朋友等不到我，所以非常生气，不再跟我说话，令我非常难过。

结论句：从此以后如果跟朋友有约，我全都会记在笔记本上，避免旧事重演。

It can be a very painful experience to be misunderstood by your friends. Unfortunately, such an experience is not new to me. It happened about half a year ago. My friend John and I decided one Saturday to go fishing together. He wanted me to pick him up at the train station that particular morning, but somehow I forgot. Not until noontime did I remember our appointment. Of course, you can guess how angry John was. Ever since then, he has never been on speaking terms with me, thinking that I deliberately stood him up. I tried several times to explain and

beg his forgiveness, but he just wouldn't listen.

I know I may forever lose a good friend because of my forgetfulness, but what really worries me is John's misunderstanding about me will never go away. I feel sad, but I have thus learned a lesson — from now on, I will always keep a notebook with me and jot down what I promise my other friends I will do lest I should forget it and cause misunderstandings again.

* 本文句首及句尾划底线的部分分别为主题句和结论句。

被朋友误解会是个很痛苦的经验。不幸的是，我就曾有过这样的经验。这件事就发生在半年前。我的朋友约翰和我决定在某星期六一起去钓鱼。他要我在那天早上到火车站接他，不过不知怎么的我却忘了。直到中午，我才想起我们有约。当然，你可以猜得出约翰有多生气。从那时起，他就不再跟我说话了，他认为是我故意放他鸽子。我曾几度尝试要解释，并恳求他的原谅，可是他就是不听。

我知道因为我的健忘可能会永远失去一位好友，但是真正令我担心的是约翰对我的误会永远都会存在。我很难过，不过我也因此学到了一个教训——从现在起，我随时都会必携带一本记事本，记下我对其他朋友承诺要做的事，以免我忘记而又造成误会。

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