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用背英语小作文的什么技巧 来提高写作质量升分数

2023-05-21 06:33:27 | 人围观 | 评论:


文/刘宝彩/天津

不管大作文、小作文,都是需要用英语逻辑思维“技巧”来写作文后,读几遍轻松地就会背下来了。其中需要打开英语写作思路是——英语逻辑思维推理法。为此看如下具体操作帮助提高英语写作质量升成绩。

写英语作文,考生可以参考打开思路的如下建议的四种思路:一因一果;一因多果;多因一果;多因多果。其表达形式:以提示点的句子为中心,左找原因,右找结果。达到结构完整、叙述清晰、细节和过渡得当。让想写英语的人,熟练书写出内容清晰、逻辑连贯、原创英语作文的梦想成真——成为‘优、精、佳、美’之作品。

由此带动考生知道了:“有词儿写,有了词儿知道怎么写”;作文审题不漏、论据过渡不丢、观点逻辑跑不走;达到“因果推理中再寻因果推理”之目标:“原因←提示点的句子→结果句子”,帮助英语逻辑思维写出英语作文水平自然升,达到英语作文=“内容+语法+逻辑”→三位一体质量高。

有了思路,考生在学习练习锻炼英语写作中,可以达到英语为母语学生“不靠模板靠逻辑”写作英语的标准。

下面以A篇,英语逻辑思维方法写英语作文,题目《请你谈个人、医生、政府共同抗疫情态度和感悟》为题;和以B篇1/2,用英语逻辑思维方法写英语作文,题目《如何看待中国传统文化》,和B篇2/2,用“抄模板套范文”写作英语作文。

A篇,英语逻辑思维法写英语作文,题目《请你谈个人、医生、政府共同抗疫情态度和感悟》。成文英语文如下:

I regard it right of doing a nucleic-acid test which is showing whether

it can prove negative for Omicron virus passed on to people out of whom risk is to get and stopped accurately from infecting here and there.

When needing to be tested, they had to put masks on to show they would make doctors and volunteers respected and themselves done throughout virus-preventing battle. This brings people to prevent infection from spreading everywhere and to have physical health.

It takes courage for the doctors and volunteers to do so potentially at risk or in danger, without fear actually, at the test-doing time.

As this time sees, naturally, people had to wear masks and are asked to keep reasonably-safe distance for two meters between them, standing in line to await a test to be done for COVID-19.

So did they protect people from the virus to be in good health. This the people held responsible for controlling the disease in return for doctors and volunteers

who work hard at winning battle against virus day and night, by their obligation arising from their responsibilities.

Their and our dream is expected to come true, depending on going through all the sweat, for their developing well healthily.

So perfectly efficiently does people’s health-enjoying mission remain the greatly original aspiration, setting in mind sincerely.

I look straight in their brilliant or bright eyes without seeing their lovely gentle faces. As is known to me, combining with this, doctors and volunteers are watched to remain busy with doing the test, in good order, for Omicron virus so adequately that they could not be seen to smile sweetly.

This enables me to find it right of them to be regarded as being guardians in charge of people’s health.

That helps me feel proud of the medical action that can be taken by the at-all-level government’s making the

in-effective-organization system stronger at present than in the past, especially in fighting against COVID-19 virus to arrange for people properly to be at work and in life, to need returning normal step by step as soon as possible, happily and conveniently.

B篇1/2,英语逻辑思维法写英语作文,题目《如何看待中国传统文化》。成文英语文如下

Dear editor,

I LI Hua as one of readers write you a letter sending you a article on such a“how to understand Chinese-tradition culture”topic as you asked for comments reader would make. So greatly does it turn people favorable for protecting a variety of Chinese culture traditionally, I feel, that as one of readers I will become one of its inheritors generation by generation.

This brings me to tell more Chinese people or foreign friends possibly about working hard at developing wide culture, according to the well-established tradition in China.

Following the Chinese tradition, the friendly relation has been set up between people and nature harmoniously, and between them on communication equally, having been got so developed at present that it will be done in future at home and abroad.

Above-mentioned viewpoint I would make known to you as well as all-China people or some foreigners. By that I am benefiting a lot, in the belief that they shall work hard at doing everything they could, in making China great again throughout a little more than 5000-year history and helping China grow stronger days to come in future.

Most people will often have revelation acquired from above culture, which would be love of Chinese lives. They, whose great spirit together with its mission is set in mind, remain true with the original aspiration.

That inspires them to join a highly-cultured activity in protecting traditional culture of China to develop culturally or mentally or intellectually.

Yours, Li Hua

B篇2/2,“抄模板套范文”思路写英语作文,题目《如何看待中国传统文化》。成文英语文如下:

Dear editor,

I'm writing to you to talk about my opinions about traditional Chinese culture. I think it's necessary for us to protect and inherit it. Here are some reasons.

Firstly, as one of the ancient civilizations in the world, the traditional Chinese culture is the foundation of the development of our country, and it can provide spiritual motivation for Chinese economy.

Secondly, it includes many inspiring and shocking events, through which we can learn some useful things to make our country develop more quickly.

Last but not least, it is an important part of Chinese history, and inheriting it may make us stronger and benefit our growth. I hope Chinese government and citizens join in the campaign of protecting and inheriting traditional Chinese culture. We should make contributions and efforts to carry it forward.

Yours, Li Hua

分析上述A篇和B篇2/1和B篇2/2英语作文:

A篇,题目《请你谈个人、医生、政府共同抗疫情态度和感悟》为题,和B篇2/1,题目《如何看待中国传统文化》用英语逻辑思维方法写英语作文,分析如下:

英语作文均衡使用英语逻辑思维四方法写作:①一因一果;②一因多果;③多因一果;④多因多果。其中逻辑思维表达形式是:“左找原因句←主题提示句→右找结果”(即:以主题提示句为中心,左找原因,右找结果)是关键之关键。

B篇2/2,题目《如何看待中国传统文化》用不靠逻辑靠模板写英语,分析如下:

“模板、套句痕迹”多多,废词废句无意义;造成了“没词儿写,有了词儿不知怎么写”的尴尬事实,如此受到了“使用词类范围小,句子结构种类少”的局限。从侧面看,反映出中外学生写作英语作文思路的不同,所以说把“抄模板套范文”写英语的方法需要改变成为“英语逻辑思维法”写英语作文。

总结:

具有实战英语写作快速捷径的思路是:不靠模板靠逻辑写作英语作文。为此如果以逻辑思维写英语作文而成功写出英语作文得高分,则向考生招手!至此,考生可以明白中外学生写作英语作文是如何解决——大小作文的思路是这样打开的——之问题了。这是背英语小作文的技巧 来提高写作质量升分数。